===== From agage@csee.usf.edu: An interesting idea, though a bit simple. ===== From davew@sheaarch.com: Very diagramatic. Accompished what you intended it to do. Not very eye catching though. ===== From vansickl@erols.com: One of the cleverer themes in this round (vansickl@erols.com) ===== From clem@dhol.com: More of a schematic cartoon than a virtual tour. I'm afraid that I was expecting more than a gold ball on a wire and a few black boxes. What shoots the ion? What accelerates it? What constrains it to follow the track? There is nothing to hint at any of these things. Textures and modelling are about as simple as it gets. The flashes in the black boxes are about the only unusual effect. Not much here to get hold of for commentary. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: I didn't get it, too much of an inside joke or something.