===== From agage@csee.usf.edu: Interesting idea, good lighting, and good modelling on the tanks. ===== From davew@sheaarch.com: If your not going to do the models yourself, at least have a story. ===== From Martin.Magnusson.7121@student.uu.se: Very good-looking glow! I think you should have used anti-aliasing, though. ===== From clem@dhol.com: Pacing is questionable, viewpoint jumps are jarring. The glow is well done. The modelling is average. I think that you did yourself no favors regarding quality by passing through avi. Compression on compression is always a bad idea and I don't think that avi2mpg does a particularly good conversion anyway. Textures are very plain. It is hard to make detail textures work in an anim especially a compressed one, but it can be done and it is worth the effort. On the other hand, you did a good job making a stable star background, often tricky in mpegs. Internal logic was lacking. What is Stonehenge becoming? A missile silo? A gigantic camera? Did the restorers modify it? Or was this stuff original equipment? What does the tank have to do with anything? Maybe I'm missing the point.