===== From pan@syix.com: From the title, "Giraffe Race" I was hoping for a finish where the winner won by a neck. ===== From eallen@highway1.com: Nice attempt. A couple of suggestions though: - The joints on the giraffes need to be smoother. They look sort of plastic. - Try modeling your motion from real-life animals running. Find a video of a giraffe running and try to mimic that. Your giraffes don't look like they are running. - You might want to try more camera positions. - These animations should tell a story. Should have a plot. In your case, a finish line would have helped. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: You certainly like races, don't you? Nice movement on the giraffe, but very poor texture on the ground: it does not show any movement. Note the rough ground in "boxer" in this round and see how much more visible the motions become. ===== From file: They look like automata giraffes and the race is kind of slow... Notable for textures, modelling