===== From eallen@highway1.com: Excellent 'believable' 3D models. However... - Not enough action. Maybe if you moved their bodies around a bit. - Too short to build up any drama. Perhaps different camera angles, closeups etc. ===== From Martin.Magnusson.7121@student.uu.se: The models are very good, and the sand texture and stone are great, too. The motion that is there is also good, but ther's not enough of it. A little bit of moving back and forth, or maybe just moving the camera a bit would have improved the scene, I think. ===== From vansickl@erols.com: They just sit there and twitch a bit. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Doesn't tell a story, hurting your theme score. Motion is a bit too simplistic. ===== From quinet@gamers.org: The models are nice and detailled, but the animation is too static. This could be improved easily by rotating the camera around the two creatures, or by zooming in closer to their heads, or both. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Very good modelling. The movement, however, is extremely limited. It would be much better to move their bodies a little bit, as well as the camera. I like the ground texture. ===== From file: I think this would look better in the stills section! Nice though Notable for textures, modelling