===== From agage@csee.usf.edu: Motion and detail are good. ===== From manorton@jps.net: I like your guns. ===== From dlauer@optonline.net: Excellant walking movement. But make any connection between the description and the animation takes a wilder imagination than I'll ever have. ===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: good foot work... some nice affects. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Cute story. Would be nice to understand how/why those pictures pop up: perhaps some kind of machinery would make it easier for viewer to recognize as target practice. ===== From ldnbruce@flash.net: Too mechanical ===== From chipr@niestu.com: Nicely done. Struck me as a clip from a larger movie. The bullets and shattering of the targets looked especially good. ===== From mark.wagner17@gte.net: Good job with the modelling. However, you should make the "identity search" section of the animation four to five times as long, so that people watching the animation have enough time to read the text.