===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Nice use of depth of field. Your guys looked a bit mechanical, needed to be more natural looking and natural moving. ===== From pdolan@jps.net: What are they? Sperm? If so, why do they have lasers? Having a story would help the concept score. ===== From lou_bruce@yahoo.com: More detailed models would help. Need more action. ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: A little over simplistic (and over caricatural in terms of colour(s) IMHO). The scene is too monodimensional. This interpretation of theme could have benefited further development. What this shows is well done, but too little. ===== From neilryan@mtco.com: I must have missed something on this one. I thought the rack-focus was well done.