===== From marlo.steed@uleth.ca: Cool affects. The Animating movement was great and the water was excellent. The stick creature moving through the solid object threw me. ===== From pdolan@jps.net: Very cool idea, but I didn't get it until I visited your website. A story would help the concept score. Less random camera movements would help artistic score. Problems with clipping (one framestick goes through the block that it's on). ===== From lou_bruce@yahoo.com: The quality of the animation was much improved over the last round. I'm still having trouble getting the story without the text file. Some very interesting animated things going on. The transition from above water to underwater was very good but you lose points for having your character pass through the landscape. ===== From vansickl@erols.com: This made no sense at all. ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: I get the impression of a huge chaos. I am not sure this was the intention although it could make for a good interpretation of theme. The energy balls just look out of place. A pity also that so many of the structures are inanimate, as if dead. Technically I'd say it's rather good : some of the camera palcements were just perfect and blended well with water surface movements to give nice effects, but going through matter gave me the impression of an unfinished animation (both camera and creatures). Nice star background. Good poster image. ===== From neilryan@mtco.com: I don't understand what is going on here. I thought the water was well done, but the creature moving through the wall was very disturbing.