===== From dearmad@sapere.com: not very clear how the gears related to the spinning planet- it was notshown. ===== From bbowen@cswnet.com: The inner workings of the outer Universe. Very original interpretation of the theme. ===== From dick@buckosoft.com: I like the lighting on the clockworks ===== From bitdaf@tcainternet.com: Nicely done with the workings...the gears and such! I owuld have liked to see more of that-with variations- and just a spot of the earth and moon refeence. Although the meaning wasn't lost on me- I understand the interpretation- Overall I enjoyed it. ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: A bit naive, though the idea has some interest. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: More like "outer workings" than "inner workings", heh heh. I see the point you were trying to make, but I couldn't help feeling that I was missing something. Maybe it's because the interesting mechanism seems to have no connection to the planets. ===== From lou_bruce@yahoo.com: The scene change was rather abrupt, without the text file the correlation between the mechanism and the world kind of gets lost. ===== From file: Notable for originality, composition, lighting, modelling ===== From file: you have very good lighting Notable for lighting, textures