===== From AzChip@aol.com: Nice to see a more cinematic approach -- well done, clear continuity between shots. Well executed animation. (And an impressive grasp of mathematical terms in your textfile....) ===== From philip.chan@home.com: Excellent use of the camera in this animation. It must be those video lessons you took :) ===== From husakm@vscht.cz: I raly do not like "to be continued" stories ... ===== From lou_bruce@yahoo.com: The models were OK. The animation was acceptable. Try an original story next time. ===== From mark.wagner17@gte.net: The low contrast between the blue text and the black tiles in the intro makes the text almost unreadable. Other than that, this is a very nice animation. For adding sound, a good soundtrack would be dead silence until the alarm goes off, at which point a loud siren starts sounding. ===== From file: Unfortunately I think there is a fair bit of story lacking from all "to be continued" stories. It didn't really have all that much of a storyline, or an alien invasion, but it was cleanly done, without any flaws (or at least I didn't notice them). I think there could have been a bit more detail, but it was all in all pretty well done.