===== From AzChip@aol.com: I liked the shockwave effect of the impact explosion. Good entry. ===== From boomerkuwanger@aol.com: The camera motion was implemented well. More elaborate textures and landscape would have helped this piece a lot, though. ===== From lou_bruce@yahoo.com: The modeling and the materials need to be more interesting to get my attention. A little more story would have helped also. ===== From mark.wagner17@gte.net: Bad choice of starfields. The bozo patterning is obvious, and the starfield flickers too much. You might try using actual objects for the stars. ===== From file: How come this is so jerky? Also, I think the models and textures could have been worked on a fair bit more.