===== From AzChip@aol.com: Nicely done -- the movement of the camera is a little abrupt -- might try to apply some kind of bezier smoothing to the movement curves.... Great entry, though! ===== From philip.chan@home.com: The explosions and the effect with the sun were nice. The fighters were a little too "box-like" and could have used more detail. ===== From boomerkuwanger@aol.com: The asteroid shapes and textures are awesome. The ships need a little bit more texture detail, though. Also, the motion is a little jerky. Other than that, you did a pretty good job. Rock on! ===== From lou_bruce@yahoo.com: You've got a good start. The models were a little primitive. The explosion debris could be a little more realistic. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Nice action, looks like something that you might see on TV. Where did they get the hollow asteroids? ===== From mark.wagner17@gte.net: The camera motion is very abrupt. Try smoothing it out. Additionally, the explosioding objects are a standard 3DS Max effect, and look very unrealistic, as if the objects are simply shells, rather than solids. ===== From file: It was a bit too quick for my liking, and the camera movements were a bit jerky. But it wasn't at all bad, and I liked it a lot.