===== From dearmad@sapere.com: Unintersting "story" and setting. Ununified approach, and undynamic. Maybe try to think of entertaining the viewer? ===== From gsingelm@acm.org: too slow. pity. but some good choices of camera movement and appropriately good modelling ===== From lou_bruce@yahoo.com: The city was pretty but kind of boring in repetition. Needed a better storyline. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Good "pursuit" idea. I like the diverse-but-similar architecture of the city. Good description of your approach to animation development. Overall story is a little too brief, and more scene cuts are needed to speed up the action. The word "police", which is important to set up the whole scene, is never fully in view. ===== From file: Motion of the robot was amazing