===== From dearmad@sapere.com: Decent concept. The lawnmower ran over him a few times- why did he need to escape if it never hurt him? ===== From gsingelm@acm.org: interesting choice of enemies. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Impressive opening, but this seems to have little to do with the animation itself. Good self-contained story, but pacing could be improved: some movements seem to be in slow motion and others happen in a flash. A few laws of physics are broken, too. Some distracting mpeg compression artifacts on the green grass.