===== From dearmad@sapere.com: With a little mor design work to your look, this may have been a winning entry- you're up there with interpretation though, as it is! ===== From michaelsobers@mindspring.com: That guy looks scary! ===== From gsingelm@acm.org: i quite laughed when i got it. nice idea. "always next time" you say... looking forward to your next character ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Opening is a bit too short: the title is never fully visible. Then a second title scene shows up briefly. Most of the scene transitions, especially towards the beginning, are quite abrupt. It looks like they were intended to be fade-outs/fade-ins, but instead of being a second or two long, they are squeezed down to a few frames. Even worse, the action sometimes stops while a transition is taking place. Nice little story though. I like the smiling pea. Clever ideas.