===== From bill@apocalypse.org: Nice job... the floating piece all looked nice (I know it looks easier that it is). The hoop-explosion at the end was a nice touch as well. ===== From file: Very static; it seems to lack a unifying theme -- what and why is the pizza dish being assembled? By whom? ===== From r@rr-163-61-149.atl.mediaone.net: Why? no offense or anything but you must admit this is a tad basic there is little or no modeling actualy involved in this ===== From r@h24-70-4-206.cg.shawcable.net: The motions of the parts looked great. The texturing on the object and the shockwave could also have been better. I would recommend using POV to create the starfield. That might give you a more detailed/better looking starfield, but it might still depend on the MPEG compression. I would also recommend trying to create the planet with POV as well. That would probably make it look more 3D and fit in with the scene better. As for the shockwave, the shadow it cast on the planet looked rather odd. I would suggest using the no_shadow keyword for the torus to eliminate the shadow. ===== From r@cpe-66-87-30-203.ut.sprintbbd.net: Not bad, but should be better use with texture, lighting and modelling. Need a plot!