===== From ian@escape-from-reality.co.uk: Nice textures and nice opening shot with the lighting. The camera seems to zoom in and out too much, and stops very abruptly at the end. There's also something very wrong with the view out of the window - it seems to be fixed in position relative to the camera and looks really odd. The ball rolling down seems to be a bit fast to start off with, maybe it should pick up speed more gradually, and the dominoes appear a little slow in falling over. ===== From OpenGLCoder@hotmail.com: Good model work, but the animation is not particularly original. I think the end could use something more (the first time I saw it I was not sure if the switch flipped or not.) Perhaps some different camera work (slow-motion sequences, panning to a better angle,etc) would improve it as well. ===== From rkf332@aol.com: The quality was pretty nice. You could have worked on the camera angles a little more, over all though not bad.