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From hobbes-kuscheltiger@gmx.at:
the camera movements are a little bit fast, I could not see everything

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From ian@escape-from-reality.co.uk:
An original idea for a machine.
The animation all looked good except for the cutting of the string at the end.
Didn't look very natural the way the end moved after it was cut.

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From OpenGLCoder@hotmail.com:
This is apparently a slightly sycophantic animation aimed at members of the
IRTC.  Most of the animation is good, but the overall look seems to have some
rough edges.  The flame in particular is poorly done.  Also, why does the IRTC
logo magically fly through the air?

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From rkf332@aol.com:
You should work ont eh modeling and camera angles, a little more.