===== From p_chan@shaw.ca: The motion is done very well. The scales on the snake also look good. I felt there was too much of a delay between the snake first hitting the cactus and jumping into the air. ===== From gsingelm@t-online.de: after smiling wholeheartedly about this nice tale i wondered: what has this got to do with adventure? if it weren't off topic you_d get full marks for originality ===== From pterandon@yahoo.com: Nice scenery. The one thing is that the lighting/ finish is a bit off so that the snake looks like he's floating in midair if you stare at him long enough. ===== From ArizonaPain@Aol.com: This was a part success for me 'cos i kept saying to myself ' a snake wouldnt react like that' nor would a cactus!