===== From steven.place@lucidapple.com: I would have to say that i was not all that impressed here. I thought the idea's were present, but nothing was here to back that up. An arrow gets shot into the target, then goes through. Thats fine, but the whole animation was very sparce. It was very 'square' like. The camera was sharp, and the scene was very boxy. ===== From glenn@mccarters.net: I really like the way the camera accelerates and catches up with the arrow. I am glad you included enough towers and plants and things to show the speed of the camera movement. Unexpected ending, what does it mean? ===== From clem@dhol.org: I like the plants and the sky. The odd towers look like giant planters. The self firing bow was a bit jarring. The arrow flying to the target had a good feeling of speed. I think the rocket second stage at the end was gratuitous. It weakened the piece. ===== From suso@suso.org: I wish that something was holding the bow because when the string is retracted, it looks like the wood part of the bow moves forward. I don't think that the "rockets" on the arrow were necessary at the end. Other than that, pretty nice. I like the way you setup the environment.