===== From Martin.Magnusson.7121@student.uu.se: Why did you end the animation right there? I would have liked to see what happend to the torii after they bump into each other. I really like the star effect in the beginning. The lighting seems a bit too harsh, as the white pillars and slopes get pretty washed out. ===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: Quite a neat concept, I liked watching this happen. It might've worked better with different textures, though, despite it not being marble if you do that. ===== From evilsnack@hotmail.com: This animation made no sense at all. ===== From steven.place@lucidapple.com: I liked this animation except for one aspect. The camera seemed very rigid, and not fluid enough to belive that it was a real camera. I would also comment on the ending, where it would have been intresting to see a collision. Otherwise i thought it was original. ===== From glenn@mccarters.net: Aaaw, I expected something to happen at the very end. This animation seems to rely too much on mathematics and too little on cinematics. Can you tell a story here somehow? ===== From clem@dhol.org: Excessively abstract to the detriment of story. The open looked ok, but didn't advance the plot. It could have been removed. The busy textures contributed to distracting artifact problems. The tori had some speed but the rolling was too hard to notice. They mostly seemed to slide. ===== From suso@suso.org: I like how you can't see what the object really is until the camera gets a lot closer to it. I wish that there would have been some "hang time" after the toruses mean at the center. ===== From r@dup-200-64-229-245.prodigy.net.mx: Notable for originality, textures