===== From Martin.Magnusson.7121@student.uu.se: Pretty nice texture on the turtle shell, but the graininess of the road and the hills is annoying. Did you use jitter? I like the idea with a fast turtlemobile. The sky and hills could use some better (more detailed) textures. ===== From maarten_hofman@hotmail.com: The music was a bit loud, so I turned it off rather quickly. The tortoise idea is fun. In the end there seems to be some randomization in the terrain and the road that keep the whole image vibrating... I believe the povray tutorial warns against this effect. It might be intended, but I found it rather distracting. ===== From steven.place@lucidapple.com: I'm not a fan of the music but that is just my opinion. I thought more could have been put into this. Alot more in fact. The wheels never turned, why a turtle? The sand dunes could have been different, and your camera angles could have been more traditional for this type of scene. ===== From glenn@mccarters.net: Some good velocity, but the anim needs more editing and purpose. One shot in the middle is very long with no action. I cannot read the red-on-black credits -- some more contrast would help. ===== From clem@dhol.org: The turtle and the opening morph are very good. The desert scenery is well done. The scene near the end where you wait for the turtle to appear is a bit long. ===== From r@dup-200-64-229-245.prodigy.net.mx: Notable for composition