===== From emperorofrome@yahoo.com: There should have been more of a winter enviroment in this piece. ===== From rich@brickbots.com: I had to watch this one a few times. It kinda baffled me with the people there.... I did like the titles. Generic Note: I really enjoyed watching these animations, but I personally think that pointing out the low points of an animation help more than pointing out the high points. As such, I usually only mention the problems. Please don't take it the wrong way :-) Technical: I would have given it better marks if it was just the snowman bit. The spectators were pretty obviously a textured plane. From an animation standpoint, While the snowman was melting, why not drop off some of the bits. Have the arms sag downwards, have the nose drop off. Maybe have the whole thing tip over at some point, or maybe just start to lean. The melting snow on the grass looked very nice. Artistic: I liked the melting bit, and maybe the birds could have worked, but the spectators just looked so out of place. Framing the snowman off center might have added a bit more visual interest. Maybe orbit the camera during the melting? Theme: It definately fit the theme, but did not give me any surprises, entertain me, or teach me anything about endings in particular. I give it a 5. The birds were a nice thematic touch and maybe without the people might have given it a more forlorn feel. Have questions about my comments? Rich at brickbots dot com ===== From Markus.Altendorff@asamnet.de: It's original, but has some serious technical flaws (or maybe i better say I'd have some suggestions...): - The snowman just shrinks. Some pieces falling off (like the stones or the arms - most likely the arms) would probably look better. - The crowd really looks like just an image map. Sorry. Maybe putting each character map on a rectangle and placing this in a 3D space could help. Nice touch with the circling vultures, by the way. Total nonsense, but very symbolic ;-) ===== From irtc_mail@yahoo.co.uk: This was definately surprising and occasionaly funny but it would have been funnier if the mpeg was smaller. It is not much fun downloading 10MB and finding it is a joke entry. ===== From file: didn't we see that at least 5 times in this contest?