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From sshelby@shelbyvision.com:
Very well done, I only had to view it once to get the point.



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From emperorofrome@yahoo.com:

Color is everything, there is too much grey in this animation. 
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From rich@brickbots.com:
Wow, two entries this month!  I had to check again and again as the two entries
have very different lighting and such.  

Generic Note:
I really enjoyed watching these animations, but I personally think that pointing
out the low points of an animation help more than pointing out the high points.
 As such, I usually only mention the problems.  Please don't take it the wrong
way :-)

Technical:
I liked your  lighting model on this one.  My only suggestion would be to use
more lights, or a larger shadow map filter, or both.  There were some parts
where I could see the individual shadows from the environmental lights as they
did not quite merge.   Again all the textures and surfaces were very flat and
clean, which is more appropriate for a space like environment, but still a bit
bland.  Another nice set of motions from the robots.   Nice attention to
detail, rounding off all the corners to help catch the highlights, having the
camera on the top of the iron lung correctly follow the captain, the captain
breathing.. all very cool.

Artistic:
I think one of the best shots of the whole piece is the first one.  It is a
great way to start the story.  But, there is always a but, I would have pushed
the control box to the right hand side of the frame.  Stylistically, I think
the whole thing is a bit spartan.  Perhaps this is appropriate for robots? 
Just maybe bumping out a section of wall here, or there, might help to break up
the big rectangular expanses of wall and floor.  I did really like the detail
on the door, and carrying this sort of extra detail through would have added a
bit.  I did not really like the checkerboard floor, but after thinking about it
for some time, I am not sure what I would do in its place.

Theme:
The passing of an eon.  I liked it! Especially the interchange about tiredness,
which contrasted the two different worlds that the organic and mechanical
inhabit, and the metaphor of a journey.  I think it could have been even better
if the master had spent a bit more time with some words of wisdom about the end
of things, or there was a bit more conflict between the captain and the master.
 It seems to me the captain must have known what the master was asking, but the
captain did not object or question.  I guess I am saying I think that the
climax could have been a bit more intense if it was a little longer with more
conflict.

Have questions about my comments? Rich at brickbots dot com

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From Markus.Altendorff@asamnet.de:
This is an excellent example of what's possible with POVray. Congratulations!
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From irtc_mail@yahoo.co.uk:

That looks like Homer Simpson in the suit: "Mmmmmmmmm, surface
subdivision".

It is always difficult to find something bad to say about your work
without nit-picking and this is no exception. I think the worst
thing about this is the larger than necessary amount of space on
either side of the 'i' in 'Passing' in the opening titles.

My only real criticism is that not enough happens in it to justify
the 97 seconds running time.



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From file:
a bit depressing, but hey, that's death. I really like the conecpt.
Notable for originality, composition