===== Nice....I think more detail would help (as you mentioned you hope to do in the future). ===== Detail would have been nice. ===== Image seems a little dark. Could have used a better background too, as it would add a better feeling of action. ===== Looks good. ===== As far as craters go, you may want to take a look at G-Forge. It's a program by John Beale that makes hieghtfields. It can do craters quite nicely. ===== Battle mechs, ho hum... ===== How about scratching the mechs up a little to make them like not quite so new? Hmm ... and maybe a laser hitting the leg of the mech on the left? This could be quite a fun scene! ===== Since you are interested in details : Laser beams are THIN ! ===== The 'mechs could benefit from a texture type that wasn't so flat. The modelling is nice for its simplicity.. I've tried mecha design myself, and understand the difficulty. ===== Lots of mech pics, but this is one of the better ones. The lasers need to glow more, and little yellow dust cloud (whatever it is) seems out of place. ===== None ===== Those Halo's on the ground needed bigger container objects to avoid the drop-off at the edge of the sphere ===== Impressive (again!) I like Earthsiege as well! ===== Cool, a picture that wasn't ripped off of a book or movie. ===== Mechwarior? You need to add that detal you were talking about. Complex is better. Use textures next time. ===== Not very detailed, the explosions could be better. (It seems I am just complaining today). ===== good flames and shapes but not original at all ===== The darkness was not used very effectively. Its harder to do a convincing night scene, because you must make the lighting be more realistic. The lighting is not in this scene. I see two mechs shadowed in absolute darkness illuminated by something. It would appear to be the explosion, but it looks very unrealistic. The mechs might look better in full light in an interesting scene. ===== Mech's RULE!!!!!!! ===== The explosions outline the shape of the sphere you used. The definite outline detracts a little from the scene. ===== A little dark. ===== One legged mechs?? ===== You might consider changing the ground texture. It looks more like water than sand. Nice 'Mech design though. ===== I like the robots, I would have maybe only done 1 and worked on more detail for the background. Also I like the fire on the ground however it looks to round. I would have maybe made the halo bigger to releave the sphereical look a little. Or added more turbulance so it did not look so round. I like the lasers though. ===== Lighting leaves alot to be desired. It's really hard to see what's there. Dust halo is nice as are the beams - adds movement to the scene. The ground is really lacking. ===== Nice concept, but the mechs looked a little, well, harmless. Too rounded. The design was okay, but I guess there weren't enough sharp edges or something. Lots of potential, though.