===== Should have spent more time on the details. ===== Interesting idea. But the walls are too plain, and the textures too flat. Could benefit a lot from more detail. ===== froody ;) ===== Some corrections may be in place here: The book is: The restaurant at the end of the universe (Douglas Adams) Then tank is black, and it shoots the floor away (after the celing and the walls...) ===== The room needs some work. I love the tank, but it just doesn't go well with the rest of the picture. Intersting affect with the fractal but it needs more I think. Some sort of link to the tank, maybe make the ray cutting out the thing or some sort of melting effect or something. I also think the robot could use alot of work. ===== I love that hole in the roof! Smoother lighting would have helped this image alot. The metallic texture of the humanoid figure blends in with the floor too well. Maybe just make him another color...gold/brass maybe... ===== Guess you had to be there. The colors are garish, the proportions seem way off, and the standing figure seems stiff and lifeless. On the other hand, I absolutely *love* the hole in the roof! Excellent idea. ===== A nice scene let down by Marvin himself. How about placing him nearer the camera so he takes up more of the scene. He could be modelled better too. The tank(?) and the roof are excellent, though.