===== From chipr@niestu.com: Good modelling and composition, and nice sun. Maybe if you'd stuck a little sign on the ship that said "School" it would have been more on-topic. ===== From jsaxton@folio.com: I like the ship, but you did not sell me on the fact that the image has anything to do with the competition's theme ===== From ucoakc00@mcl.ucsb.edu: The topic was school. Then suddenly... ===== From lowellr@globaldialog.com: I don't see anything to do with school ===== From jjanger@mail.cspp.edu: I'm sorry, but the lack of a serious tie in to the subject hurts a lot. ===== From shipbrk@gate.net: Nice halo on the sun. You might try putting some texture on the ship to make it a bit more visually interesting; perhaps a bump_map with lines and panels on it? ===== From sonya_roberts@geocities.com: Sorry, but your description of WHY this image has a link to the stated topic strikes me as just *TOO* tenuous. So, as much as I like to see unique or non-obvious interpretations of themes, I'm afraid I'm going to have to knock a few points off for Concept. ===== From ingo@ibm.net: Sorry for the bad vote (7/6/5) - but 'science fiction' was the topic in the round next to the last. ===== From marvil@algonet.se: I little more texture on the red star wouldn't hurt. The interpretation of the theme is a bit strange...? ===== From peter@table76.demon.co.uk: A nice enough ship, but it just doesn't convey "school" or "school bus" to me.