===== From chipr@niestu.com: Nice calendar. The pencil-holder looks very unrealistic. And what is that telephone wall box doing in the scene? Also, very thin connection with the topic. ===== From mmandl@aol.com: Your English is 1000 times better than my German, which is nonexistant, so no need to say more. ===== From ucoakc00@mcl.ucsb.edu: It's a bit plain. ===== From amarok@geocities.com: Some extra details would have been nice. ===== From eallen@highway1.com: The pencil holder seems to glow. Too sparse. ===== From lutzen@vip.cybercity.dk: Your picture shows that you will be able to do some great raytracings once you have practised some more. Try to make the scenes more complex (but not crowded) when you feel ready for it. ===== From jlb36@cornell.edu: You have a good start here for what could be a well done scene. As it is now, it seems a bit empty. Try putting more objects in to fill the space--not too many though, so it doens't get cluttered.