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From chipr@niestu.com:
Good modeling spoiled by a lack of focus and detail.  If you had combined your
effort into one scene, I think it would have rated higher than your two scenes
put together.

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From mmandl@aol.com:
Your background needs improvement.

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From jsaxton@folio.com:

I like the technical aspects of the image, but it doesn't do anything for me on
an aesthetic level.
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From ucoakc00@mcl.ucsb.edu:
Too simple.
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From bill.marrs@pureatria.com:
nice job on the pen and pencils, the background looks inferior though 
- a little more on the table would have helped.

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From eallen@highway1.com:
Too simple.


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From jaime@ctav.es:
A bit more complex than your first scene, but its exactly the same theme! Why
you dont have mixed both scenes and submited only one?
Jaime (jaime@ctav.es)

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From marvil@algonet.se:
The pen looks good, but the pencils have too strong colours.
Caneta1.jpg looks better.