===== From chipr@niestu.com: Nice bright colors, good modeling and composition, brightly lit. But the colors are a bit too bright in some spots. The apple looks like it's machined out of metal. The purple pencil seems to be embedded in the notebook a little. And the view outside the window isn't visible through the open part on the bottom. ===== From mmandl@aol.com: I liked your books. ===== From charlie495@aol.com: This image _seriously_ needs to be dirtied up a bit. ===== From bbowen@cswnet.com: Very nicely done. I'd say you've accomplished your goal of creating a good indoor scene ===== From xeo@sprynet.com: Objects are great. Composition is poor. Camera should have been a little to the right, away from the wall. ===== From ucoakc00@mcl.ucsb.edu: Why is the image skewed? From a human perspective, the windows ought to appear vertical. ===== From amarok@geocities.com: Too bright lightning? ===== From bill.marrs@pureatria.com: spiral notebook is nice, generally I appreciate the attention to details. The globe could have been more earth-like... ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Hey, is that plum-colored pencil sunk into the notebook surface? Have you ever seen a textbook that has no author? ===== From sonya_roberts@geocities.com: Nice scene - the lighting is great. The direction of the grain of the floorboards is too regular, you might want to try throwing in a random rotation about the Y-axis to it. Your apple looks great - bect one I've seen so far. Like the spiral binding, very well done. ===== From jlb36@cornell.edu: The textbooks are quite well done. ===== From jaime@ctav.es: Nice modelling and composition. Chars in blackboard are too perfect if they are handmade. Jaime (jaime@ctav.es) ===== From marvil@algonet.se: Nice apple, and the notebook looks very realistic. But I think the globe has too strong colours.