===== From agage@mines.edu: Lighting seems very flat, letters are hard to read. ===== From wozzeck@club-internet.fr: Funny! I had the same idea to put letters in my picture in the beginning! But for what sad reason did you write with red letters on a red brick wall? ===== From lowellr@globaldialog.com: The letters should have been a different color for readability A better effect for the bricks would have been to randomly scatter different shades of brick throught. ===== From sonya_roberts@geocities.com: That red text in the image dissapears against the red brisk background; even zoomed in quite tight, I can't read it. You'd have been better off using a contrasting colour, such as white, yellow, black or even green. I liked the semi-transparent cut-away view of the cylinder containing the red genius, and all of the windows are very nicely modelled too. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Curiously flat and cartoonish -- I see almost no shadows in the scene. I looked at this image several times before I realized there is text in the scene! ===== From alex@astro.queensu.ca: metal at bottom looks fake, needs reflectivity ===== From SSchanevil@aol.com: A little too much red brick. I like the idea. ===== From marvil@algonet.se: Pedagogic and with strong colours, this picture could serve as an illustration in a technical book for children. ===== From peter@table76.demon.co.uk: Hard to read the text. ===== From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de: Quite oringly modelled and even more boringly lit (is there any light at all?)and textured. Nice, funny idea, though.