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From jroy@internauts.ca:
Not bad for first entry. Very shiny ... you like shiny I guess ;)
Keep up the good work.

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From jkittle@earthlink.net:
Cleanest floor ever

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From 101741.541@compuserve.com:
 Good for a first time.  The ground is overly reflective.  Toys are not
very messed up, try rotating everything a little.  Pay attention to colors. 
Maybe get good knowledge of "pure" Pov before using a modeller.

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From tlyons@gnn.com:

sombody picks up???
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From wozzeck@club-internet.fr:
If this can help for your next pictures:
Your lighting is a bit too hard. Your floor is too reflexive, leading to a
common
"swimming pool" feeling.

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From jaime@ctav.es:
Sorry, I've laughed! :( But I see the pics before the txts, I think it's a good
thing to rate more objectively. Well, about the image, I've only one comment :
please, continue working... and keep it!

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From bobfranke@halcyon.com:
No cause for laughter here.  Although you are new at this, you seem to have a
good grasp the concepts and many of the functions of POV.  The most obvious
area for improvement is the floor.  It's too shinny.

It takes a lot of time (weeks) to develop a winning image.  This is a good
start.  Please continue to participate, so we can all enjoy your progress.

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From arcana@sinbad.net:
A good first attempt. Too bright and reflective though. :{)

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From ethelm@bigfoot.com:
A little too simplistic. Floor too reflective. 
Nice effort.

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From bill.marrs@pureatria.com:
The floor is too shiny, a good first time though.


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From r@regulus.its.uu.se>:
Reflective surfaces are nice, but is not appropriate in this scene.