===== From cmorack@relex.com: Hands are all screwed up to read any time. And is it PM or AM? ===== From Revera@concentric.net: Good job on the glass bubble - GH REVERA ===== From agage@mines.edu: Link to the theme is a bit weak. ===== From Martin.Magnusson.7121@student.uu.se: What's there is pretty good, but as you say - more details would be good for this scene. ===== From cussat@infobiogen.fr: Night, night, night... good image for time topic, but it was a past round... ===== From sanna@censa3.polito.it: A good image, but it lacks of originality and the interpretation of theme is modest ===== From kefriber@online.no: A darker scene with more shadows etc. and I would have rated you higher, and if this is your first 'real' scene you are really getting somewhere, keep on tracin' :) ===== From tpeters@eagle.cc.ukans.edu: I like it, but i just started too. ===== From dormammu@erols.com: Doesn't reall have much to do with night, other than the picture is supposed to be at night. Might've been better if you had put a window in the background that shows a night sky or something similar. ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: Very good for a first image! ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Good modelling on the clockface and glass. But what is the significance of this? Why is the clock in a museum? Is there a connection to "Night"? The position of the hands is incorrect. If it's really 01:20, then the hour hand should be further clockwise. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: modeling : There's an interesting use of texture, and the clock model is elegently done in its simplicity The base is quite interesting. lighting: I think more creativity could be applied in the lighting here.... nothing indicates the museum is closed. topicality : How do I know this is the "night". It could just as easily be "early afternoon".... ===== From peter@table76.demon.co.uk: Nice texturing. ===== From r@dial-up30.webbernet.net: The clock and the stone base are not bad. Now you need to work on giving the scene a background and telling a story with your picture instead of just showing an object. Something like a dark piece of cloth between the clock and the stone base would have helped the image by removing distracting reflections on the bottom part of the clock. Adding some refraction in the glass dome would have made the clock more realistic. This comment by clem@dhol.com.