===== From castlewrks@aol.com: Picture has no focus... mostly dark interesting overall, it would benefit with a street-light or something to contrast with the overall dark of the picture. ===== From agage@mines.edu: Nice modelling. ===== From Martin.Magnusson.7121@student.uu.se: Good mood. I especially like the light from the windows. ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: A very nice night time scene. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Great details on the houses -- they all look realistic. The halo/atmosphere seems too strong, it obscures the sky and the buildings, and the ground. My eyes wander all over the image -- it needs a small bright object to become a focal point. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: Nice sky!!! However, you need to see the tutorial on atmospheric effects -- the extension of the window frames into the mist isn't realistic. The water, also could use some adjustment -- it looks like blue ink. However, overall, the scene has a lot of potential. Add a little more interest to the shoreline, add a little texturing, and it will be quite good. ===== From r@dial-up30.webbernet.net: Not bad. The buildings need more detailed texturing. The sky is dramatic but unnatural. No story. Something needs to be happening, or at least there needs to be a place to focus. This comment by clem@dhol.com.