===== From agage@mines.edu: Interesting mood, though the background is a little wierd. ===== From jaime@ctav.es: Hey! You haven't used +a! Blaspheme! :) ===== From Martin.Magnusson.7121@student.uu.se: Since it has been torned off, the water should be calmer, IMHO. The edges of the waterfall are pretty good. ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: A nice idea. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: This could become a great scene! Excellent theme and composition. But it needs quite a bit of detail work. First, turn down the "ambient" values in all the textures, to eliminate the flat glow. Next, add randomness to the water surface, by using "bumps" or "wrinkles" to reduce the concentric rings. Finally, add a more realistic background... ===== From uwe.post@gmx.de: nice idea. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: The modeling isn't bad (although the water ripples are too intense and too short), but more use of texture would make it a really good result. Also , the background needs some work. ===== From r@dial-up30.webbernet.net: Nice fountain. Good composition. Strange, but interesting lamps. The woman seems to have a broken arm. What is the stuff in the background? This comment by clem@dhol.com.