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From tlyons@gnn.com:

looks to pinched somehow,like its a 1024 squeezed down to 800
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From spanky@wpi.edu:

I like the streaks in the sky.  You need more contrast in this scene,
especially
with color.  Experiment with light sources and this scene become's twice as
good
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From gregj56590@aol.com:
Poor lighting and/or contrast. 
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From d97ta@efd.lth.se:
tiptoeing through the topic, eh?
the image is a bit pale (could use a bit more contrast)
the foreground needs some attention, maybe a rock or tree or something
to break up the emptiness.


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From ewgr@abaddon.globalnet.co.uk:
Keep it up, you certainly have imagination and that can go a long way.

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From Martial.Rameaux@wanadoo.fr:
 


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From ulf.schreiber@gmx.net:
If the rainy weather was not accidetally created, then this is done
well.
Also the lava streams. The right halo could use an altered color map and
more turbulence so that one doesn't see the outer shape.

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From buck@cs.byu.edu:
I like the lava alot.  It's pretty murky, perhaps too much so, but I
think murky is probably the right "atmosphere" for the scene. :)  Very
good, for your 3rd scene!

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From djconnel@flash.net:
Nice idea, and difficult to pull off, but if you work
on your lighting and make more creative use of
normals the scene will be much improved.

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From fisher2@pobox.upenn.edu:
Too much fog really washed out the detail in the scene.  Perhaps a lower
level ground fog.  A red light source coming from the lava at the top of
the volcano would have made a nice addition.

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
Entire scene seems grey - washed out.
Maybe this is deliberate.  Is it a depiction of heavy rainy weather?
The lava looks good and hot.