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From gregj56590@aol.com:
Poor tie in to theme.
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From d97ta@efd.lth.se:
don't get the connection with nature, this is just a rendering of colefax's
galaxy include with a few cheesy planets thrown in.
the sun isn't bright enough. looks more like mars.


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From buck@cs.byu.edu:
Nice scene.  The sun seems underly bright, though.  Perhaps a higher
(perhaps even > 1) ambient would help make it look more like a "sun"?

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From djconnel@flash.net:
The scale is way off.  The moon is 50 Earth diameters
from the Earth, and the sun is 150 sun diameters from
the Earth.

Also, the topography on the E & M is too extreme.



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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
It's a great showoff of Chris Colefax's include file, but not much of your own
work to judge here.  Top priority to improve this scene: add a corona to the
sun.