===== From roth@ens.ascom.ch: not bad at all ! ===== From Sean_Hamilton@amrcorp.com: Excellent detail, but the scene is so sterile. ===== From tlyons@gnn.com: concept not appearent without the description :-( ===== From gmol@my-dejanews.com: Very good, a little bit of detail at the top right would have made it look even better! ===== From jsaxton@folio.com: Great concept. I like the details in your image. I would have liked to see a more interesting color scheme. I don't know what it is, but raytracings that rely on the primary colors are less interesting to me. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Fine image. Good modelling, particularly on the scaffold and forklift. The bank of computer monitors seems out of place here. Let me guess: they were an afterthought, to fill in some empty space (how about putting them in a bona-fide control room?). In a place like this I would expect to be able to see quite a few warning signs around. Nice blue glow around the tubes. Bricks on the back wall are much too large. Why the high point of view? A normal pov would increase the drama, make the structure more imposing, and emphasize the human figure. ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: Interestin interpretation of subject. Well Done. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: Bob: Excellent job! I don't see how you find time to produce such good work with the excellent work you've done on winvote, which we all appreciate. The only suggestion I have is that there is a lot of emptiness in this image. I think the problem is the image lacks a real foreground, or even a real focus. Perhaps a more interesting viewpoint, such as near the computer terminals, would help. Still, it's an excellent piece of modeling! Dan ===== From bill@apocalypse.org: good composition, attention to detail - cool concept. ===== From wozzeck@club-internet.fr: Nice work, nice lighting and nice media{}. I think that the colours you got are just too plain. Credible for such an industrial area, but something less clean would have looked better. ===== From ekennedy@voyager.net: Love the concept! ===== From 101741.541@compuserve.com: Individual objects are very well modelled (crates, elevator, stair,...). Colors needs to be "broken" : avoid pure red, blue and yellow, try to give some "tension" to the colors and textures. The point of view is too omniscient; more drama would have been achieved with a camera setting that enhances the sense of the big size of the room. ===== From r@cust193.webbernet.net: Good concept. A bit too much open space diminishes the impact of the cyclotron. The fork lift is a nice touch. The ladder is well done. The ambiance is really more industrial than research. Overall, I like it. This comment by clem@dhol.com.