===== From nx@chez.com: Everything is blur ! ===== From gmol@my-dejanews.com: Nice, but a little too blurred...... ===== From wembly@theramp.net: Very nice, good job ===== From bobfranke@halcyon.com: Why is this image so out of focus, it hurts my eyes to look at it. Was this a result of the jpeg conversion. There appears to be some very nice detail here but it's hard to see. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: I like your initials carved above the doorway. Major flaw: *everything* is out of focus, except your name. Why? ===== From arcana@sinbad.net: Did you use focal blur when creating this image? It's coming across as being jsut a tad too blurry for me. Almost impossible to make out details. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: This image is close to being an excellent entry. However, it has some features I find take away from what at its core is really an excellent piece of work: 1. the focal blur is way overdone 2. the walls would be better done as height fields than normals. At least, the normals need more work. 3. The "fire" is excellent! The others are hard to recognize, though.. more work on lighting and texture would help. The candles are excellent, the concept is very good, the modeling of the chandalier and the doors and floor is extremely good... just clean up a few technical elements, and I think this one could really rank high. ===== From bill@apocalypse.org: I don't like the fuzziness or the green walls, otherwise a very cool image. ===== From wozzeck@club-internet.fr: I simply do not understand why this image is so blurred. Otherwise it could have been fine! ===== From 101741.541@compuserve.com: From the 1-day rendering time on PII-400 and image appearance, I conclude that you used focal blur, right ? (but you don't say anything about it). Focal blur becomes interesting when there is blurred areas AND sharp areas; everything is blurred, here, it's boring and time-consuming. The textures are also harsh and dark... The chandelier seems nice, apart excessive blurring. ===== From r@cust193.webbernet.net: Good idea. The fire is well done. So are the candles and chandelier. The coloring of the candles is a very good idea. I don't like the wall texture. The image as a whole seems irritatingly out of focus. Is that intentional or a compression artifact? This comment by clem@dhol.com.