===== From scooby@pld.com: Pleasing to the eye, but too much woodgrain texture. ===== From Sean_Hamilton@amrcorp.com: Your spheres with the elements look good, too bad they aren't bigger and i can't see all of them. ===== From tlyons@gnn.com: too dark... maybe gamma corection would have helped? ===== From bobfranke@halcyon.com: At first glance I thought, "Oh, a pinball machine". But when I turned up the brightness, I could clearly see the glass dome. The dome should be just a bit less transparent. Maybe the image would mean more to me if I saw the movie. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Surprisingly interesting, given its simplicity. It looks like a mechanism that I cannot quite decipher the purpose of. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: Interesting model! However, the scene needs a bit more to make it complete -- some context. It relies too heavily on the text file for explanation. Where is it? Why is it there? Also, given the extreme close-up of the wood, it could use some imperfections. See, for example, the entry from the Nature round of the honey jar with the flower in it. ===== From bill@apocalypse.org: I wish the camera was closer, seems far away. ===== From 101741.541@compuserve.com: Please make the wooden planks continue until they reach the border of the screen ! And remember one of Glenn McCarter's top ten tips : add a backfill light... ===== From r@client8788.globalnet.co.uk: Notable for originality ===== From r@dial-up46.webbernet.net: Odd little idea. Your element balls are not detailed or large enough, considering that they represent the topic, and the "containment system" largely obscures them. The wood work and lighting aren't bad. This comment by clem@dhol.com.