===== From Sean_Hamilton@amrcorp.com: I like the idea (and I'm not smoking), but the tornado could have used some motion blur or something. ===== From skywise@fix.net: I really liked the way you depicted air... It was a rather original concept. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Really not bad. I like the dirt and water. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: Nicely done! The background is more interesting than it might have been due to the nice use of the red zone to the right. The tornado looks more like it is emitting particles vertically due to the lack of turbulence -- that could use some more attention. And the water needs some work -- it is hard to know what to make of those blobs. But the scene is quite effective and addresses the theme very well. ===== From wozzeck@club-internet.fr: Tres joli. La tornade est encore imparfaite, mais l'aspect esthetique de l'ensemble est tres reussi! Tres beau glacon. ===== From 101741.541@compuserve.com: I like the checkerboard idea, sitting on a reversed mount. Colours are a little messy, lacks of contrast.