===== From Sean_Hamilton@amrcorp.com: I love the boiling water in this one. But the rainbow seems too sharp for the turbulence going on around it. And who threw a paper aiplane into the scene? ;) ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Very pretty, but your water isn't transparent! ===== From jsaxton@folio.com: having the elements come together in a chaotic mess is a great idea ===== From bobfranke@halcyon.com: I really like the water. Although it is not very realistic, you have created a very violent and stormy mood which extends into the rest of the image. Also, there is no need to apologize for your english. It is way better that my non-existent second language. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Incredible energy. Great concept, but the execution leaves me cold. The "aircraft" are gratuitous, but at least they provide a scale for the scene. The broken mountain revealing the lava is the best part. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: This one has a lot of promise, and is a nice use of the concept, but it needs a bit more work. Some examples: * the scene looks too flat -- it doesn't have a 3-d feel to it. * the rainbow is out of place. The light sources are wrong for it here. * the water looks solid, not at all transparent + refractive. * the ships look like paper cutouts, not 3-d objects. Still, with a little work this could be quite effective -- it is very dynamic. ===== From bill@apocalypse.org: wow, too much action, like a hollywood movie ===== From r@cust193.webbernet.net: The fire looks good and the water isn't bad. The water, as hf water is likely to do, looks too solid. In this case, at least, I think that it is because waves that sharp should be undercut. The image is dynamic, but it is also a little too busy. What is supposed to be happening is far from obvious. This comment by clem@dhol.com.