===== From jerry@hoboes.com: The buoys, as somewhat the center of attention, could probably use some work; the sky looks 'flat'. That is, the sky features don't appear to change towards the horizon. ===== From amason@cs.uct.ac.za: I don't get it :) ===== From pmccombs@hotmail.com: I always like to see entries that are hand made, using no tools. ===== From justin@scpmcs.org: While I admire the attempt to be different, it didn't quite capture the essence of Water for me. ===== From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de: Did you write "three boats"? I can only see three fins. Hm, maybe I don't have enough imagination. ===== From pdolan@jps.net: I don't see any boats - unless you mean the shark-fin like things. Try to have a more recognizable subject. ===== From johnson@pharmacy.arizona.edu: Looks less like an abstract than something just thrown together. Good abstract is hard to achieve. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Decent texture on the "boats", but overall just a little too abstract for my taste.