===== From nels1678@tc.umn.edu: This image has alot of potential, but it is lacking some detail. :) keep with it.. :) ===== From jerry@hoboes.com: Hey, you're not the only person that feels that way about winning--this contest always has such incredible entrants! This was a good idea. You might have added more hopelessness to it; perhaps some buildings of different sizes, or some indication that the building we *are* seeing is incredibly tall. Maybe there ought to be some debris floating to the surface? Maybe also an indication of what's beneath the surface. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Too simple. ===== From pmccombs@hotmail.com: Good sunset. ===== From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de: The water surface is really nice, but the building is somehow strongly distorted. I cannot quite make out if it's bias or just toppling over or there's something wrong with the projection. The windows also reflect the sky at funny angles. ===== From jaime@ctav.es: Not be so hard. The final result looks interesting. Perhaps I see a strange distortion in the lower left part, on the building: camera angle? ===== From Varyk@aol.com: major change I would recommend is that the sun would have more of an oran= gy-red color at the horizon like that (especially with all the clouds.) = Nice arrangement, I'm biased towards sparse images. ===== From djohnston@iname.com: I think in general, it would have been more appropriate to have the sky grey, as if the rain had only just let up. It gives more a feeling of hopelessness, I think. I thiknkit also would have been better to have moer buildings, and maybe some debris floating by. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: All those bricks placed by hand? Yes, that must have been a pain. Some very strange perspective effects happening on the building. ===== From r@tk156239.telekabel.at: Hmmm... theres something wrong with the geometry of the building. And by the way, WHY didn't you use #WHILE loops ???