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From jerry@hoboes.com:
The trees are very nice in the background; the foreground ones could possibly be
less straight. Your river going into the lake looks man-made; is that what you
wanted? Wonderful job on the grass!
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From Sean_Hamilton@amrcorp.com:
Great grass

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From gregj56590@aol.com:
Mountains need more texture.  Intersection of rock w/ grass is too linear.
Grass is nice.
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From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de:
The mountains are too featureless and the sand is far too steep, especially on
the left side.
The light, shining directly vertical, is very boring, as is the uniform color
and texturing of the mountain and stones.
The shadows of the trees all have a hole in the middle lokking rather absurd.
The grass and the shadows on it look interesting, but not really like grass,
it's too uniformly distributed.

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From Varyk@aol.com:
beautiful grass!  I think I would have lit the scene at an angle so the p=
erfectly circular pine foliage wouldn't have cast perfect circles on the =
ground.

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From djohnston@iname.com:
I particularly like the streama nd the grass. The water in the lake seems to
orderly, following those perfect rings. Some kind of turbulence might help
there. Great Work.

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From gmccarter@hotmail.com:
Yes, it is serene.