===== From jerry@hoboes.com: I thought the sub driver was from "Planet of the Apes" :*) Nice shirt, though, where can I buy one? Your school of fish is much too even, but otherwise it's a cool image. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Cute. Nice, consistent, cartoony look that knows it's not trying to be photorealistic. Cool texture on sub. ===== From vogelap@email.uc.edu: Nice concept, but needs some refining. ===== From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de: The fish are ordered much too regularly, I'm not sure why there are hedges on the ground of the sea. Why is the submarine in the foreground but facing away from the hatch? A technical note: it is impractical to make overhead hatches in under-the-sea dwellings. A hatch on the underside of such a construction could be left open permanently without the need for a complicated airlock. I don't particularly like the texture of the submarine, but maybe that's just my taste. The lighting of the scene and the relative positions of the objects is very unclear, as there are no shadows. ===== From johnson@pharmacy.arizona.edu: The school of fish is far too regularly arranged, you can see the grid pattern the array produced. You can fix this by interleaving two or more arrays of fish (with fewer fish) irregularly. That gets the regularity you want in a school, but the irregularity present in a real school. Alternatively, you can alter their xyz coordinate randomlly a bit as you place them. ===== From Varyk@aol.com: sounds like the sea urchins took a lot of work and it's a shame they are = so small that it doesn't show. ===== From djohnston@iname.com: I very much liked the story you built the image around. (It alos explains why the sub would have such a wacky paint job ). The atmosphere is good, but maybe having one or two oither subs "driving" by in the distance would help give the effect of it truly being an underwater community. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: The sub is nicely modelled. The school of fish bothers me -- too geometrically rigid. Needs more randomness. ===== From peter@table76.demon.co.uk: I really like the submarine. The fish look too regular though; perhaps they should be scaled to different sizes? ===== From r@138.102.96.24: Notable for modelling, composition