===== From manorton@tcnet.net: Serpent looks ok. but your water could use some work for my tast, and the splash also. ===== From jerry@hoboes.com: Nice serpent; good use of fog. The water splashes don't really fit in with this image; they look more like flowery collars than water. ===== From gregj56590@aol.com: Water is insufficiently transparent. Splashthroughs are all wrong. Great texturing on the dragon's skin. Fisheaters need lots of teeth to grab fish! ===== From bsieker@techfak.uni-bielefeld.de: The "water" looks more like milk, it is white and completely opaque. Most scottish Lochs that I saw had very clear water, and if not, it was muddy brown, but never white. The "splash" (?) looks more like a collar. ===== From Varyk@aol.com: Water looks like purple paint. Could use a more realistic color and some= transparency. Cool dragon! ===== From djohnston@iname.com: The water splashes in the water and the serpent remind of me of old claymation shows I used ot watch as a kid. I like it. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: The serpent is great, the water is not. ===== From r@tk156239.telekabel.at: Really, a nice monster, but the water... looks like milk?