===== From bobfranke@halcyon.com: The kitty is not too bad. The other two in the competition are better, but they used Poser. The pattern for the fur works well, but fuzzy fur would be nice. Animals are hard to do, I admire your effort. One obvious area for improvement is in the texture for the dresser and table. The texture is applied to the entire object instead of the individual pieces of wood. Also the grain needs to be rotated separately for each piece. This is a good place to experiment with random numbers for some of the values in the texture. ===== From newkirk@snip.net: Wood patterns need adjustments to look realistic (or synthetic even) Cat looks carved from marble. Something about the color_map needs tweaking, at least. ===== From kniazfam@ohio.net: It's a very cute idea! The only comment I think I can make as far as improvement goes regards the textures. The kitten looks slightly blue, and the wood textures need more turbulence. Other than that, it's a nice image. ===== From grimmg@hotmail.com: and the cat's face ? ===== From dick@buckosoft.com: I would have liked to see more out the window. Some trinkets on the dresser too. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Very good effort. I wish there were a few other objects on top of the dresser. Nice wall texture and kitty modelling. The window/outdoors is a good addition. Drawer handles seem awfully medieval, robust. Wood textures need a little work. The wall is blank. It needs a clock/poster, or else point the camera more towards the cat. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: This scene has a lot of potential! I especially like the lighting -- the darkness adds to the mystery. But it could use some more work.... the cat needs a bit more (the legs look like stumps) and the room is almost sterile-stark. ===== From east103@dialaccess.com: I would have liked to see more variation in the textures and more reflected light on the cats face. ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: Fits the topic, is cute and the objects quite well made but overall the image seems too empty. ===== From blaineholmes@hotmail.com: Nice image. ===== From r@haka.saunalahti.fi: The kitten looks a lot better from the front than from the rear - there's something in the proportions, and he also seems to lack some of the features usually found in the rear part of a cat, a condition which might cause severe problems with the digestive process. I've made a kitten out of blobs myself, and even after days of studying feline anatomy books, as well as actual cats whenever they chose to be around, it still a reasonable approximation at best. I'd suggest texturing the bodyparts independently if you're trying for a tabby cat - the only cat coloring (apart from the obvious) I could realistically create with a single povray texture is tortoise, and even that requires some care. Of the rest of the scene, the mirror looks nice but the walls and the furniture are rather featureless. Also, the dresser is suffering badly from the "bloody huge tree" effect.