===== From Sean_Hamilton@amrcorp.com: The orange planet looks odd, perhaps it needs some polar caps? The atmosphere on the planet ends rather abruptly. Great job on the landmass and the nebula. ===== From gmccarter@hotmail.com: Awfully smoky sky behind those stars, isn't it? Nice overall impression. Good planet below. ===== From djconnel@flash.net: This scene has a lot of potential! But.... * X-wings from Mars?!?!? * The stars are a bit overdone. * The relative size of the earth and moon implies the camera is quite distance from the Earth and zoomed in, but this seems inconsistent with the relative perspective of the X-wings * There isn't much original work here. Still, I like the individual rendering of the planets, and the idea of X-wings visiting Earth has a lot of potential, as I previously noted. ===== From east103@dialaccess.com: I think your purpose would have been served better by using a more alien craft than a Star Wars staple. I realize that you call it Xwing, but I don't think most people associate them with Mars. ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: Could be from Star Wars. Gives the impression of being a background for something else. Needs a strong "subject". Connection to topic a bit thin. ===== From blaineholmes@hotmail.com: I like the nebula in the sky.