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From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com:
Yes, OK, role playing is imaginary.
One thing bothers me in the image : the candles flame looks a bit faint in
comparison with the light it is supposedly casting.
The rest is pretty good and the story OK. But maybe you should have considered
many stories have to be read and this is a bit long, so a diagonal read was all
I could afford to do.

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From shipbrk@gate.net:
Nice work.  Wish more of the Cray (er, Coalition Mk 30) were visible, since you
seem to have put so much research into it.  Good books.

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From ethelm@bigfoot.com:
Your text fits the concept but the image not as much.

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From gshaw@monotix.co.za:
Nicely modelled. Is it my imagination, or are the some of the books within
the wall?
Candle would look better with some melted wax.

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From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au:
Very nice. Good concept and execution, with an eye to details. Love the
bifocals.
One quibble: there is an obvious fill light in front of the middle red pointy
cap, evidenced by the cap shadows on the wall, but no visible light source.
Some wear and tear on the books would also add realism.

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From jull43@ij.net:
It is a nice scene but with no imaginative impact.