===== From denny1@home.com: Its a good start. I like the textures on the planets. The two on the right look like a dirty sand, the one in the upper left looks heavily cratered. ===== From Alain.Culos@bigfoot.com: Second trace ever ? Keep going ! Well it does look simple but it is nicely arranged. Simplistic interpretation of topic though. ===== From ethelm@bigfoot.com: Good concept. ===== From gshaw@monotix.co.za: Texture on pyramids needs scaling down. One of the planets looks like it's going to fall. Otherwise nice. Maybe add something to indicate a portal. ===== From mar@physics.usyd.edu.au: Not bad for a second image... I remember my second image - it was just a reflective sphere or something! The planets are good. The ground looks a bit flat though, and the pyramids are obviously the same object translated. If you translate the pigment differently on each copy, you'll avoid the "carbon copy" effect. ===== From peter@table76.demon.co.uk: Nice textures, and lighting each object is something I keep seeing recommended, but never remember to do. ===== From jull43@ij.net: More pyramids.